What is your favorite fall activity? Who do you do the activity with? When do you do it? How do you feel? Describe the activity to me. Be as detailed as possible. Make sure that you have 300 words for this free write. Hint- Write the freewrite into a word document. Check the word count in the document then copy and paste it over.
I love the season fall because of the colors and how you can see the trees changing colors. The leaves are so pretty and I love to see the leaves fall off the trees. My favorite fall activity is to rake leaves in my front and backyard and make a big pile of the colorful leaves and run as fast as I can and jump into the brown, red, orange, and dark green fall leaves. I have a lot of people I love to do my favorite fall activity jumping into big pile of leaves. They are my neighbor named Cecilia that is in 5th grade and my brother named Matthew who is in 6th grade and sometimes the little girl my mom baby-sits named Jenika who just started kindergarten. All my friends I do my favorite fall activity all go to Perry Schools. I do my favorite fall activity anytime of the day i'm in the mood to run and jump into a big colorful pile of crunchy fall leaves. Here are the steps of how I do my favorite fall activity. First, I rake almost every leaf in my yard. Then, I rake the colorful leaves in a big pile on the side of my house. Next, I make a head start from behind the colorful fall leaves. Then, I run as fast as I can toward the pile and I jump in the pile! Last, I have to rake the colorful fall leaves all up so I can have as much fun as I had the first time doing my favorite fall activity raking the colorful fall leaves and jumping in the pile. That is what I do in my free time and that’s my favorite fall activity in the world. I can’t wait until more colorful leaves fall off my trees in my back yard.
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Wednesday, October 8, 2008
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2 comments:
Hi Rachel cant wait for my party on saturday!
Thanks for all the help on my blog's!!
Love your blog!!!
Rachel- I love raking leaves and watching them change too! +9 Remember to use different paragraphs for different ideas!
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